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He set my soul on fire
Just to watch it burn.
It feels like it's happened again;
It's like they're taking turns.

Is that all that a man does,
To hurt and hurt again?
If so, Then no, I cannot go
And bring myself to them.
I was kinda sad when I wrote this...I really did feel like it, but I really am much better now.
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Men are douchebags. :icondojimaangryplz:
Short and powerful poem btw! :D (Big Grin) 
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Mysticstar875 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Student Writer
Thank youuuu <33 I really mean it!
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Mooh come here! Hug 
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Mysticstar875 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Student Writer
:hug: :D
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KalineReine Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awww, this is beautiful. :love: Really amazing piece of writing.
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killuaxme Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
i really like it, good job
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Mysticstar875 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much ^^
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killuaxme Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
you are welcome =D
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Adonael Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
A winning first line.
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Mysticstar875 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Student Writer
Haha! ^^ Thank you so much! I really try to grab attention with the first line, so I really appreciate it :3
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