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He set my soul on fire
Just to watch it burn.
It feels like it's happened again;
It's like they're taking turns.

Is that all that a man does,
To hurt and hurt again?
If so, Then no, I cannot go
And bring myself to them.
I was kinda sad when I wrote this...I really did feel like it, but I really am much better now.
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Men are douchebags. :icondojimaangryplz:
Short and powerful poem btw! :D (Big Grin) 
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Mysticstar875 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Student Writer
Thank youuuu <33 I really mean it!
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WhitePlumFragrance Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Mooh come here! Hug 
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Mysticstar875 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Student Writer
:hug: :D
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KalineReine Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Professional Writer
Awww, this is beautiful. :love: Really amazing piece of writing.
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killuaxme Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
i really like it, good job
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Mysticstar875 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much ^^
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killuaxme Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
you are welcome =D
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Adonael Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
A winning first line.
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Mysticstar875 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Student Writer
Haha! ^^ Thank you so much! I really try to grab attention with the first line, so I really appreciate it :3
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Adonael Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No worries. It was a pleasure to comment :)
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cskadoz Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013   General Artist
whoa . . . ! it's like i told my sister when her heart got broke, "All guys are ass-holes! I know . . . I'm a guy." tears streaming, she laughed. "Then what do I do?"
i thought for a sec and shrugged. "Slap him in the face and go out with his best friend?"
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Mysticstar875 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student Writer
Aww man that's terrible XD I've done that before, though. Totally worth it. I am so awful, I swear. He really deserved it, though! D:

Payback's a bitch.
What more can I say?
It's the little itch
The feeling they should pay.

Tear them down,
Build them up,
See that frown,
'Cause they fucked up;
Little smile
On your lips
Think a while--
They totally deserved it.

:3 Cool. Revenge poem with swearing. Thanks for the inspiration. What do you think? Is it dA submission worthy?
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cskadoz Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013   General Artist
:highfive: abso-fucking-lutely!
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Mysticstar875 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Student Writer
LMAO GREAT! :D Will do, then! ^^
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aillin1 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013   Writer
:icondragoncryingplz: Sarah? Are you okay?
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Mysticstar875 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student Writer
Yes :3 Now I am.
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aillin1 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013   Writer
:icondragonhugplz: Good to hear.
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Mysticstar875 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Student Writer
^^
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