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Haiku

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It's a sad life when
The one you love so deeply
Will never love you.
I've never written a haiku before. I hope it turned out well ^^
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lebloodypoet's avatar
I agree, it is a bit direct. However, I feel as if I can relate to this poem deeply. So, I guess if you were to ask me I'd say that this is excellent for your first haiku. I, myself, have attempted haiku. Just [link] lazy to post them I guess. Good job.