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Wash the crimson away--
The red that paints this city.
Take my slumber away--
The horrors in every dream.
I'm falling on my knees,
Begging you--
Please,
Please,
Please,
Spare one last night for me.
This Afghan poverty
Makes me plead--
Please,
Please,
Please,
Death stop shadowing me.
Chase these ravens away--
Hunger that hunts so many.
See children waste away--
This plague we call poverty.
The red that paints this city.
Take my slumber away--
The horrors in every dream.
I'm falling on my knees,
Begging you--
Please,
Please,
Please,
Spare one last night for me.
This Afghan poverty
Makes me plead--
Please,
Please,
Please,
Death stop shadowing me.
Chase these ravens away--
Hunger that hunts so many.
See children waste away--
This plague we call poverty.
Literature
Mataar Daqores, Take 3
Original Text
Kaumul pukac mataar daqores
Om liyo oceo tok camoyokarsa
Si daqores
Yoruke, loruke, curuke, do tarouled
Aroe, wotoe, ekeke, do omrusad
Si daqores
Yok, cuk, mezok, lo ome ye dalores
Om liyo oceo; mataar daqores
Gloss
cause.pain-SUP-COM know-QUANT river-PRO sit-PRS-DIR
3.M old.M.ADJ go-PST-M.ADJ think-GER time-wander.GER-PRO-PL
and sit-PRS-DIR
wander-AGNT-PL sing-AGNT-PL range-AGNT-PL 1.M people-COM-PL-SUP
bird-PL western.thrush-PL eastern.thrush-PL 1.M 3.M-IN-PL-SUP
and sit-PRS-DIR
wander-GER range-GER cry-GER even 3.M-PL not able-PRS-DIR
3.M old.M.ADJ go-PST-M.ADJ river-PRO sit-PRS-DIR
Moraic Breakdown
Ka.u.mu.l pu.ka.c ma.
Literature
alone
I'm pretending to be what I used to be.
I'm falling into loneliness , darkness and despair .
I hoped to repair or to be prepared ,
But I wasn't , and now I'm here
Standing in the night ,
facing the cruel reality :
"The only thing I can be is lonely"
Literature
Tell me how
Tell me how
you can cause me
to turn red at a single phrase
Tell me how
you can cause me
to even forget my name.
Tell me how
you can cause me
to trip over my words
Tell me how
you can cause my
heart to be stirred.
Tell me how.
Because m'dear
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Every 11 seconds, a child dies of poverty. The war in Afghanistan has left so many people homeless and dying. Statistics show the average age in Afghanistan is 17, while in America, the average is 44. 1 in 5 kids here dies before the age of 5. It's so sad.
I attempted to write a structured poem based on a child in poverty. This is the most worked-on poem I've done yet. Hopefully it shines through and gives a smidgen of an idea to those that have no idea what's going on across the world.
Also--I promised that the next literary writing I put out there would go out to because I noticed how loyal she was to my work. Commenting, favoriting, everything. Thanks for the support!
I attempted to write a structured poem based on a child in poverty. This is the most worked-on poem I've done yet. Hopefully it shines through and gives a smidgen of an idea to those that have no idea what's going on across the world.
Also--I promised that the next literary writing I put out there would go out to because I noticed how loyal she was to my work. Commenting, favoriting, everything. Thanks for the support!
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The originality of the issue which this work speaks of means little compared to the creative effort and technique put into it. However the fact still remains that the issue is spoken of often.
I think, though the technique could be improved, it is a remarkable work. The vision and passionate thought put into this piece of literary work is superb.
The work speaks to me of the pain and suffering being experienced around the world in less fortunate places. It speaks of death and chaos.
I wish to give my honest congratulations to the author, and my honest opinion of the work.